Thursday, 3 May 2012
Thursday, 9 February 2012
Monday, 30 January 2012
Advanced feedback
Very Graphic but goes well with the lyrics.
Good animation.
Slightly repetitive when legs are dangling off the edge.
Overall think it suits the song well, good job!
More angles of the lip syncing.
I really enjoyed the Flash animation, however the lip syncing clip seemed quite repetitive.
Good mix between animation and real video.
Editing could be sharper when music pauses finish.
An excellent synchronization of animation with real time video.
I loved the interpretation of the lyrics.
A few of the shots repeat a bit too much (dangling legs and stomach of pills)
Lip syncing seemed a little emotionless in parts.
Video fits in nicely with the lyrics.
Good animation.
Slightly repetitive when legs are dangling off the edge.
Overall think it suits the song well, good job!
More angles of the lip syncing.
I really enjoyed the Flash animation, however the lip syncing clip seemed quite repetitive.
Good mix between animation and real video.
Editing could be sharper when music pauses finish.
An excellent synchronization of animation with real time video.
I loved the interpretation of the lyrics.
A few of the shots repeat a bit too much (dangling legs and stomach of pills)
Lip syncing seemed a little emotionless in parts.
Video fits in nicely with the lyrics.
Tuesday, 10 January 2012
Digi Pack feedback - analysis
Level 3- Awareness of conventions of layout and page design
This could be in a more prominent place E.g the top doesn't reflect genre well.
Could perhaps reposition the text to a more such as the board in the center of the poster, or could just have the word misfit in the frame and have the rest of the title across the top. Although i think that having the text in the top of the page works and conforms to our chose genre as it is slightly skewed making it unorganized and chaotic which fits with the themes of the album.
Level 3- Awareness of the need for variety in fonts and text size
One font, variety of text sizes.
Using one font help to reinforce the themes of the album as well as create a consistent mood through the work. To improve
Level 2/Level 3- Accurate use of language and register
Needs band name.
All language is appropriate.
Level 3- Accurate use of ICT for the task set
Photoshop good use of photo manipulation.
Level 2- Appropriate integration of illustration and text
No band name but decent amount of pictures.
Level 2- Framing a shot, using a variety of shot distances as appropriate
Lack of shot types and distances.
Level 3/Level 2- Shooting material appropriate to the task set; Selecting mise en-scene including colour, figure, lighting, objects and settings
Decent use of mise en scene, could use something for emphasis the genre e.g more people/band.
Lighting is good, colourful.
Level 3- Manipulating photographs as appropriate, including cropping and resizing.
Decent use of editing tools and techniques (crop, resizing, overlay, etc).
This could be in a more prominent place E.g the top doesn't reflect genre well.
Could perhaps reposition the text to a more such as the board in the center of the poster, or could just have the word misfit in the frame and have the rest of the title across the top. Although i think that having the text in the top of the page works and conforms to our chose genre as it is slightly skewed making it unorganized and chaotic which fits with the themes of the album.
Level 3- Awareness of the need for variety in fonts and text size
One font, variety of text sizes.
Using one font help to reinforce the themes of the album as well as create a consistent mood through the work. To improve
Level 2/Level 3- Accurate use of language and register
Needs band name.
All language is appropriate.
Level 3- Accurate use of ICT for the task set
Photoshop good use of photo manipulation.
Level 2- Appropriate integration of illustration and text
No band name but decent amount of pictures.
Level 2- Framing a shot, using a variety of shot distances as appropriate
Lack of shot types and distances.
Level 3/Level 2- Shooting material appropriate to the task set; Selecting mise en-scene including colour, figure, lighting, objects and settings
Decent use of mise en scene, could use something for emphasis the genre e.g more people/band.
Lighting is good, colourful.
Level 3- Manipulating photographs as appropriate, including cropping and resizing.
Decent use of editing tools and techniques (crop, resizing, overlay, etc).
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